Utterly fantastic work. Definitely enjoying it so far. That being said: I'm playing through the itch.io client, and whenever I try to save, I get this error. Oddly, autosave seems to work fine, though.
Small bug: When in Dark Mode, every entry in the Codex save for Salt Bay is still in black text, rather than the white text used elsewhere. Salt Bay displays properly, but Ishari, The Blood Guard, and The Ancient Ones all have black text for the entries themselves - difficult to read on a dark background.
Latest update is great! Wonderful writing, and excited to see where things go next.
Very good - quite enjoyed what's available so far. One thing I noticed in particular with a lot of the 'choose your emotional reaction' segments, though: All of the options are single, unified responses. What I mean by that is that there doesn't seem to be any with two emotions or an emotional conflict - despite the situation being very complicated and the MC at the time being a child. It seems like it would be normal to be both scared of a newly introduced father as well as to want to get to know him - or to be hurt/sad and resentful at the ostracization brought on by the townsfolk - etc. I understand that would add a lot of writing to put all variations of that in, but just something that stood out to me.
Really enjoyed this, and looking forward to more. For those having issues downloading it, try from the itch.io client instead of from browser. I don't see a download option on the page, but the itch.io client lets me download it just fine anyways.
Worth noting: Currently, due to only the Linux download being marked as to which OS it is for, the itch.io client refuses to let me download the Windows version from inside.
Utterly fantastic work. Definitely enjoying it so far. That being said: I'm playing through the itch.io client, and whenever I try to save, I get this error. Oddly, autosave seems to work fine, though.